She asks him lots of questions but does not give him time to answer this would unsettle him and make the audience aware of just how ambitious she is. Macbeth starts this scene in a decisive mood but by the end of it has given in to his wife's powers of persuasion. Sentences are correctly constructed and punctuated but not always phrased well.There is a reference to the effect on an audience but this needs development.The use of a simile is noted but it is not explained what it is, what it means or why it is being used. There is a limited attempt to analyse key vocabulary or literary devices.
However, there is not enough supportive evidence quoted or analysis of the language attempted. This answer shows a reasonable level of understanding of the text and a development of a personal response.Feedback comments – Not bad but room for improvement! By the end of the scene she has persuaded him back again and the audience thinks that she is a stronger character than her husband. Lady Macbeth says "We'll not fail" which just dismisses the idea. Macbeth's biggest worry is about what will happen to them if they fail. She also says he does not love her if he does not carry out the murder. I think that she is right about him at this point. She uses a comparison to call him a coward but he tells her that he is a real man. She has strong ambitions to be Queen and uses different arguments to make sure that he does do what she wants him to do. Lady Macbeth makes sure that Macbeth will do exactly as she tells him. In this scene, Macbeth wants to stop the murder and says "We will proceed no further". Point 2 from the above would form the main part of an answer and look in detail at the extract.
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